Blitzkreig Chess(working name)

I read this for a long time to get my insight right.

I think it is a really original story with I think is rare these days, and if I have not seen a plot like this then I haven't heard of it.

The plot will have tons of characters if you are going for 'every' planet, unless you do something later from this rough draft.

the tournament is really unique in what strategy the teams can win and the conditions are really good.

My critic on this is the actual make of it. I thought it was more on the political view of the tournament than the games itself but it is to make the reader understand the thoughts of what is happening on Earth.

Some of the lines for the plot seem like it would be better with images than a sentence.

And finally, the ranking of the chess pieces don't seem to be beneficial in any way or any kind of restriction to what role it can't do while the players seem to be able to move around.

(If I find any more critics on this then I will add some to this post than making another one)